Best Friends

B ecause you're so B-eautiful and wonderful. Both inside and out!
E ven though we're apart E-ach day, we're together in heart and still very close.
S weet, yes you are, S-weet as sugar.
T ime, you give me your T-ime, your undivided attention.
 
F reely you love me. F-reely I love you.
R easonable in all matters R-egarding each other.
I n everything be true, I-n your mentality and physicality.
E verything honest between E-ach one of you.
N o misunderstandings to N-egate you from each other.
D oing your best to D-o your best with each other.
S oulmates and S-haring!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dyer Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 8:50 PM
Very good on such a challenging poetry form!
Turner Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Loved the read, Great acrostic and a great tribute to love and friendship, Cody
Sweetheart Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Great spin on the acrostic form ... I like them too.. and your words are so tender and lovely... nice to know this kind of loving exists... thankxxx for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poetry too.. much appreciated... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Townsend Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 11:01 PM
Awesome Acrostic! The truth is spilling over in this write and in such a creative double form. True talent here! Oh, and thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on my writing. I really appreciate your kindness. Smiles from Lolita
Haick Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Wonderful Acrostic! They can be challenging, though. This is inspiring! Great job, Marty! Peace and love, Audrey
Dufresne Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 7:10 PM
wonderful Marty. I admire your knowledge of poetry forms. Am learning very slowly. Thanks for your comments. Robert
Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Some special one should enjoy this one. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
Gumbo Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 11:10 AM
I love this love this love this!!! brilliant and I adore the way you embedded the letters within too!
Endicott Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 8:54 PM
i have 2 new poems and this poem rocks :)
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November 12, 2009 at 8:33 PM
I LOVE THIS POEM AND ALL MY POEMS ARE JUST WORDS PUT TOGETHER I AM OK
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