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Best Friends

B ecause you're so B-eautiful and wonderful. Both inside and out! E ven though we're apart E-ach day, we're together in heart and still very close. S weet, yes you are, S-weet as sugar. T ime, you give me your T-ime, your undivided attention. F reely you love me. F-reely I love you. R easonable in all matters R-egarding each other. I n everything be true, I-n your mentality and physicality. E verything honest between E-ach one of you. N o misunderstandings to N-egate you from each other. D oing your best to D-o your best with each other. S oulmates and S-haring!!!

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Date: 11/29/2009 8:50:00 PM
Very good on such a challenging poetry form!
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Date: 11/20/2009 6:31:00 AM
Loved the read, Great acrostic and a great tribute to love and friendship, Cody
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Date: 11/17/2009 4:13:00 PM
Great spin on the acrostic form ... I like them too.. and your words are so tender and lovely... nice to know this kind of loving exists... thankxxx for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poetry too.. much appreciated... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:01:00 PM
Awesome Acrostic! The truth is spilling over in this write and in such a creative double form. True talent here! Oh, and thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on my writing. I really appreciate your kindness. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/14/2009 5:23:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic! They can be challenging, though. This is inspiring! Great job, Marty! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/13/2009 7:10:00 PM
wonderful Marty. I admire your knowledge of poetry forms. Am learning very slowly. Thanks for your comments. Robert
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:56:00 PM
Some special one should enjoy this one. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2009 11:10:00 AM
I love this love this love this!!! brilliant and I adore the way you embedded the letters within too!
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Date: 11/12/2009 8:54:00 PM
i have 2 new poems and this poem rocks :)
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Date: 11/12/2009 8:33:00 PM
I LOVE THIS POEM AND ALL MY POEMS ARE JUST WORDS PUT TOGETHER I AM OK
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