Best Friend - Worst Enemy

I found a new friend today
A friend to take my fears away
It is a friend that you must buy
It has a name, its called a high

It seems to be the latest style,
" You're welcome here, let's smoke awhile. "
It turns me loose, it sets me free
From the dullness of reality.

But sometimes though I start to wonder
Does it lift me up or drag me under?
The fears it took were only hidden
And feelings seem to be forbidden.

Now my friend has turned on me
And thus become my enemy.
I think about the price I pay
And go get high anyway.

Inside it seems I'm always crying
Why do I feel as if I'm dying?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 21, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Such a dilemma, you write very well Brenda..
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December 24, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Thank you Silent One.
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December 17, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Great poem!!
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December 18, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Khadeejeh !
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December 17, 2017 at 8:59 AM
I like this one a lot! I think you should definitely keep up writting! (Just from personal experience) I felt it has been extremely therapeutic as I slowly leave my demons behind me.
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December 18, 2017 at 8:35 AM
I agree Stefani, writing is good for the soul and a way to put my demons in check. Thank you my friend
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December 15, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Another poignant pen Brenda. You're a very talented writer :) I wish you well and welcome to the soup! xomo
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December 16, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Thank you Maureen !
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