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*Part of a collection I am working on titled "Love Letters to a Stranger"*

I'd love to listen, passion sung, Words warmly from your tongue. Oh the time, when beauty chimes, And my heart is firmly strung. Rhymes adopt a new confession, Although those lines are fleeting. We'll score the meeting, hearts loudly beating, Love born where friendship's sprung.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/22/2025 3:43:00 PM

I enjoy this lovely rhyme. It is open and welcoming. I will read more.

Devin Croteau
Date: 4/22/2025 3:55:00 PM

Thats's very sweet! hope you enjoy my collection!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/22/2025 10:35:00 AM

Hello Devin Croteau, so nice to meet you. I enjoyed this poem. The lasxt verse is my fav, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/26/2025 11:54:00 AM

Hello Devin, You are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Devin Croteau
Date: 4/22/2025 10:55:00 AM

Thank you!!!

Richard Morris

Date: 4/22/2025 8:40:00 AM

It is a pleasure to see poems that rhyme instead of prose passed off as poetry. Good job! Keep up the good work.

Devin Croteau
Date: 4/22/2025 8:53:00 AM

Thank you!!! My rhyming poems are typically among my favorite to write. Free verse is fun too, but I find it needs to flow really well to be passable.