Devin Croteau Poet Rhyme

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*Part of a collection I am working on titled "Love Letters to a Stranger"*

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I'd love to listen, passion sung,
Words warmly from your tongue.
Oh the time, when beauty chimes,
And my heart is firmly strung.

Rhymes adopt a new confession,
Although those lines are fleeting.
We'll score the meeting, hearts loudly beating,
Love born where friendship's sprung.

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Hilda Greenhough April 22, 2025 at 3:43 PM I enjoy this lovely rhyme. It is open and welcoming. I will read more. Devin Croteau April 22, 2025 at 3:55 PM Thats's very sweet! hope you enjoy my collection!

Darlene De Beaulieu April 22, 2025 at 10:35 AM Hello Devin Croteau, so nice to meet you. I enjoyed this poem. The lasxt verse is my fav, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2025 at 11:54 AM Hello Devin, You are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/ Devin Croteau April 22, 2025 at 10:55 AM Thank you!!!

Richard Morris April 22, 2025 at 8:40 AM It is a pleasure to see poems that rhyme instead of prose passed off as poetry. Good job! Keep up the good work. Devin Croteau April 22, 2025 at 8:53 AM Thank you!!! My rhyming poems are typically among my favorite to write. Free verse is fun too, but I find it needs to flow really well to be passable.