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She said that we were drifting apart. But I feel that we were close from the start My heart was torn out from deep within She said I had changed from what I had been I didn’t know what to say We used to talk every day. Now that things had changed I felt that I had gone deranged Dear friend, the one who was the best Why have you left me alone with the rest?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2014 10:40:00 AM
really good piece this, nice flow with good rhyme showing truth straight from the heart. well done
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:33:00 PM
Gut-wrenching poetry my friend. You have described so vividly the changes which take place after an intimate love gone bad. Sometimes one or both lovers realize after a while that who they thought they loved had other issues which they hadn't know about early on and that they didn't like. Sympathy coming your way. Love can hurt.
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Date: 5/29/2014 8:13:00 PM
Beautiful and sad Mazz
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Date: 5/29/2014 7:45:00 AM
Congrats for being featured. I hope you find yourself a new friend
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:29:00 PM
Sad poem but nicely written....friends come and go... You'll find a new one friend or maybe the old one again :) Ana
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Date: 5/27/2014 5:03:00 PM
Love that last line.
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:55:00 AM
Great write - congratulations on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:19:00 AM
lovely poem, friends do drift apart one reason or another, but if its a true love kind of best friend it hurts more,
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:44:00 AM
Lovely poem here!! Welcome to poetry soup!!
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:25:00 AM
Anashe I lke it..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:55:00 PM
Nice beginning to your poem. But it left me wanting more. What kind of deranged feelings did this separation cause? In the end, how did this relationship effect you? Adding more in depth detail will draw us in more.
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