Best Driver

best driver his claim went to sleep singing_voice rang as he crossed the center line
I am glad that I was there to awake him and also that we were not meeting any cars or 18 wheelers....

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Date: 11/30/2012 4:47:00 PM
great poem about all too common occurrence. Scared the behabbers outa me and I wasn't even there. I have, though, had my near disasters behind the wheel..... There is a blessing here..... You were spared and we still have your wonderful pen.... Praise God!!!
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:39:00 PM
You saved a disaster. A beautiful Senryu. I like it. Thanks for your enlightened comments on my Tanka Demands of Love. Life, Sara, is not a bed of roses. More often it passes through bad times. There is no dearth of companions of good times. One must look for that gem that gliters in the dark. Regards. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/29/2012 3:16:00 PM
well, thankfully It sounds like all turned out all right!!
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Date: 11/29/2012 10:16:00 AM
Thank God, everyone was safe!! Jag
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:37:00 AM
Oh how scary my friend! I hope this doesn't happen often! This is a wonderful write about this event! I'm glad everyone is alright! What a spectacular poem my friend, Great Work!!
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