Get Your Premium Membership

Best Day

i just can't express how beautiful was that day when we were discussing our ways and night was full of cool rays the breeze was full of your touch and i was dreaming too much about you and me.... waiting to listen that 3 magical words which compile of whole world when u would say? then suddenly i listen something which i was not able to believe those were that 3 magical words ... which seems more magical when he said thousands of butterflies started flying and i was like on cloud nine that was the best day of mine...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/31/2015 11:01:00 PM
love it
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2011 4:34:00 AM
Lots of good things here, nice rhymes, nice flow, last two line are a nice summary (I'd drop the word 'like' though). I'm not convinced by the 3rd and 4th verses
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2011 4:28:00 AM
most touching and beautiful write Neha.. enjoyed with luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things