Best Day

i just can't express how beautiful was that day
when we were discussing our ways
and night was full of cool rays

the breeze was  full of your touch 
and i was dreaming too much
about you and me....

waiting to listen that 3 magical words 
which compile of whole world
when u would say?

then suddenly i listen something
which i was not able to believe
those were that 3 magical words ...

which seems more magical when he said 
thousands of butterflies started flying
and i was like on cloud nine
that was the best day of mine...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 11:01 PM
love it
Bagnall Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Lots of good things here, nice rhymes, nice flow, last two line are a nice summary (I'd drop the word 'like' though). I'm not convinced by the 3rd and 4th verses
Sweetheart Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 4:28 AM
most touching and beautiful write Neha.. enjoyed with luv..
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