James Inman Poet Rhyme

Besotted

Jealousy eats at me, masticating my miserable flesh,

each time I see your opulent smile it takes yet another bite,
chewing slowly savoring and seeking my heart to enmesh

. . .as visceral emotions move slow through molasses midnight.



12/25/2019

Gregory R Barden
Arbitrium Divisa contest
Taken from "Jealous"

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Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2020 at 3:48 PM oh YES, great imagery, my friend!!! James Inman February 26, 2020 at 4:04 PM Thanks Andrea

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2020 at 8:37 PM wow, very creative. Fantastic imagery, my friend. James Inman January 17, 2020 at 5:04 PM Thank you Andrea.

John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 10:13 AM This is great James, congrats on your win in Greg's contest! James Inman January 14, 2020 at 11:39 PM Thank you John. I didn't know it had been judged yet. I'll check it out.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 26, 2019 at 6:30 AM Aah, Poetic Grasshopper ... ever the Word-weaver. Your quill skills are unquestioned, James! A brilliant piece of poetic artwork. Love and best wishes for the holidays. James Inman December 26, 2019 at 6:49 AM Hi Freddie, "Poetic Grasshopper," I like that. a nice way to start my day, with a smile. Thanks for the nice comment and I hope your Christmas was wonderful and your coming year even better.

Beautiful Scars December 25, 2019 at 6:59 PM wow amazing! Greg will love this, winner to me :) Good luck x:-)-luloo James Inman December 25, 2019 at 8:13 PM Lu Loo, I hope your Christmas has been wonderful. Thank you for sharing a moment with me tonight and your always beautiful comments.