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Beside Myself

Oh, I believe I deserve to hurt, The day’s slipping by as the sun pours molten orange along the western horizon forging a shield of darkness. Now as a robust moon rises to embellish the night sky, I am beside myself and in the throes of frenzied agony; After much beseeching She finally consented to moonlight rendezvous— but where? For the life of me I just couldn’t recall! ~06/01/18 ~Pick a theme, "Solitude by the Reverie" Host: Laura Loo

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Date: 6/16/2018 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Abdul. Well done.
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:08:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:46:00 AM
beautifully expressed poem dear Abdul, really enjoyed this, thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/8/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Laura. Appreciate much.
Date: 6/5/2018 3:33:00 PM
mellow write that moves me, adbul... well done!..huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/8/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thanks nette. Glad you liked it.

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