Beside Myself

Oh, I believe I deserve to hurt,
The day’s slipping by
as the sun pours molten orange
along the western horizon
forging a shield of darkness.

Now as a robust moon rises
to embellish the night sky,
I am beside myself 
and in the throes of frenzied agony;

After much beseeching
She finally consented to moonlight rendezvous—
but where?
For the life of me I just couldn’t recall!


~06/01/18
~Pick a theme, "Solitude by the Reverie" 
  Host: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Abdul. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:08 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:46 AM
beautifully expressed poem dear Abdul, really enjoyed this, thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Mandani Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thanks Laura. Appreciate much.
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:33 PM
mellow write that moves me, adbul... well done!..huggs
Mandani Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Thanks nette. Glad you liked it.
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