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beside city bridge

beside city bridge night falls electric blue, then black, while one bird sings

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2024 10:58:00 PM

I like that blue becoming black night. Congrats on a great win

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/21/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Andrea Dietrich, The line is true -- I experienced this very thing just a couple of nights before I wrote this. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2024 7:52:00 AM

I could see you there, experiencing this wondrous sight. Congrats, Christine!

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/9/2024 9:01:00 AM

Kim, Thank you. This haiku is based on a an experience I had just the night before I wrote it. A walk in my little city -- across a little bridge -- to a little park as the night fell -- my partner and I sitting on a bench and one bird did sing.

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/9/2024 8:07:00 AM

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:32:00 PM

How beautiful and picturesque is this, such a detailed and creatively woven haiku, well deserved win it is, pleasure reading this gem, congratulations

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/9/2024 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Ink Empress. I appreciate your kind words! :).

Karen Jones

Date: 12/8/2024 11:18:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and balance of nature versus man in your haiku! Love this! Congratulations on your win!

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/9/2024 8:04:00 AM

Karen, Thank you for your congratulatory words! I am glad the balance of man and nature made for this little haiku. :). What joy!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:42:00 PM

congratulations on your winning haiku dear poet. cheers!

Christine K Munsell
Date: 12/9/2024 8:03:00 AM

thriveni c mysore, Thank you so much. It is wondrous to win a placement in this contest. :)