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Beside a Rippling Stream

Under star studded sky
And bright moon low
I wrap you in
My loving glow
Whispering words
Of love you so
As camp fire burns
With flames high
We drift as lovers
In night sky
Cuddle up tight
In lovers delight
Beside a rippling
Stream tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/30/2013 12:04:00 PM
NICE INTROSPECTION OF ONES LOVE FOR ANOTHER XDAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 1/29/2013 8:51:00 PM
A wonderful piece of art.
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:48:00 AM
Oh as the stream flows so does your wonderful poetry...this is so good...
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Harry, love Elizabeth
Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM
This makes me long for the summer, a campfire, and a night under the pinetrees. Lovely poem, Elizabeth!
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Carrie, me too :) love Elizabeth
Date: 1/28/2013 7:36:00 PM
Hello Elizabeth, Very bright very beautiful. A drifting view.. love the passionate moment to come :-) always~ LINDA
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 12:22:00 AM
Thank you PD, love Elizabeth

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