Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Beside a Rippling Stream

Under star studded sky
And bright moon low
I wrap you in
My loving glow
Whispering words
Of love you so
As camp fire burns
With flames high
We drift as lovers
In night sky
Cuddle up tight
In lovers delight
Beside a rippling
Stream tonight

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David Scott January 30, 2013 at 12:04 PM NICE INTROSPECTION OF ONES LOVE FOR ANOTHER XDAVIDSCOTT

John Loving Iii January 29, 2013 at 8:51 PM A wonderful piece of art.

Harry Horsman January 29, 2013 at 10:48 AM Oh as the stream flows so does your wonderful poetry...this is so good... Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 29, 2013 at 4:52 PM Thank you Harry, love Elizabeth

Carrie Richards January 29, 2013 at 7:41 AM This makes me long for the summer, a campfire, and a night under the pinetrees. Lovely poem, Elizabeth! Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 29, 2013 at 10:38 AM Thank you Carrie, me too :) love Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2013 at 7:36 PM Hello Elizabeth, Very bright very beautiful. A drifting view.. love the passionate moment to come :-) always~ LINDA Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 29, 2013 at 12:22 AM Thank you PD, love Elizabeth