Beseeching the Whitelace Ghost

( A sequel to my poem “The Lady of Whitelace Castle” )


Are ye, my lady, an apparition
or perchance a fair servant frail?
The ruddiness of pinks 
touching neither your cheeks
as you wander about so pale

My lips turn blue from winter’s cold
under this arch of elm sentinels
growing quickly despondent 
not knowing the truth
of your present presence tale

Speak, please now, that I may dispel
ghost sagas of Whitelace myths…
Be ye her Mistress 
in this ghostly vision
or the fair servant once lost in the mist? 

Some hold the truth in the latter
but for me the true facts do matter
as I am the one
that bid Mistress farewell
when her hand was promised another

It’s been bantered about for years
that you seek true love unattained
I’m wondering now
if our forbidden vows
is that love that you search for in vain

I beg that ye now speak your story
tossing my sanity here out as witness
for in health’s decline
my heart also seeks 
the lost love of the Castle’s Mistress

I stand here now in this snow drift
shivering skin on now brittle bones
I could surely die
A satisfied man
If my joining your spirit would atone  

© 2014 Debra Squyres 01/30

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/1/2014 10:12:00 AM
The mistress of the castle is walking pale halls. Awaiting the beginning of a love to newly fall. The air is scented with the past. With tomorrow's dreams she hopes wiil last. Love this ghostly traveling you do Debra. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/31/2014 6:44:00 PM
WOW! You came back with a bang my friend! This is a enormously wondrous write! I surely loved reading this delightful poem here this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/31/2014 6:14:00 PM
A haunting tail here with alot of sadness, and suspense, very thrilling and passionately expressed in your wonderful lines of poetry. thank you for sharing your insight to mystery. cherii also thank you for your comments
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