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I hear faraway thunder as I soak in the rain. It was never my intention to trigger pain. Still, here I am, waiting for the storm to hit. I scribbled memories on a fragile paper split. Aiming to seize the spirit of a lightning bolt. But it was never intended to be mine,  in short. Due to lack of caution, I humbly beg for pardon. Purity will be reborn, in our garden.
Written: May 23, 2023

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Date: 5/24/2023 1:43:00 PM
Purity will resume for certain and there will be a rose in bloom again, in your garden. Lovely poetry Sotto… Belle
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Date: 5/24/2023 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful writing. I can feel its power.
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Date: 5/24/2023 5:13:00 AM
Don't think I would want the energy of a lightning bolt. LOL..More power to you. Thanks for sharing these couplets with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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