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What can satiate the soul? What can surpass love? Perhaps that which delights the palate with a sweet tooth? A crunchy crust of pastry filled with delicious double cream yellow, fragrant, and luscious, and splashed over the crunchy crust refreshing berries of all kinds, flavour and texture combined. Bite into the mystic aroma, As juice dribbles on the lips, lick, eat and be satiated on deliciously fruity raspberries, blueberries, strawberries, blackberries, covered with honey, corn syrup, plus a dash of sweet yoghurt.

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Date: 7/30/2021 3:43:00 PM
That’s one luscious yummy fruity pie Victor, just the thing on a summer’s day. Lovely poetry… Belle
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Date: 7/28/2021 3:00:00 AM
Wow! Sounds scrumptious, Victor, I would love to dig in:)
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Date: 7/28/2021 2:48:00 AM
That is exactly what I would like to have at the moment, Victor! In summer I live mostly on fruit. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/28/2021 1:11:00 AM
Oooo, not only looks good but tastes delicious. Your poem so tempting..Delice
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:12:00 AM
Delicious!!! I loved the description that made one crave for...
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Date: 7/27/2021 2:34:00 PM
Mmm…yummy!
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:08:00 PM
A sweet treat that surely can't be beat! A delectable poem and picture, Victor. Evelyn :)
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Date: 7/27/2021 11:41:00 AM
Reads like an awesome dessert or even an afternoon snack. Thanks for your visit to my page. I like the way the idea of this poem was presented . Sara
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Date: 7/27/2021 11:10:00 AM
- Lovely, Victor ... and now is the time to pick the berries for free in nature ... fill up your buckets ... good to have in the freezer for the winter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2021 9:25:00 AM
mmm delicious poem on so many levels - I am inundated with raspberries my crop is enormous this year!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2021 5:23:00 AM
Your poem as delicious as the photo. Tempting description, Victor. Skillfully delivered, as always.
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Date: 7/27/2021 4:18:00 AM
All I need to bring is my fork right ? and you will provide the delicacy for my gluttony, lol, have a good one dear friend, stay on the sweet side of life, :)
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:06:00 AM
Mouthwatering Victor, apple pie and cream my downfall lol. Tom
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:02:00 AM
Ohhh... Fruit tart, anyone? Sumptuous dessert. What happened to the kiwi and peach... LOL... Love the imagery...
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:42:00 PM
Mmmm.. I , a sweet tooth can not resist. Sounds just perfect ..
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:02:00 PM
Hi Victor, You've penned such a delicious write. I enjoy a variety of berries. Now I'm hungry, but it's too late. Well done. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:02:00 PM
You make my mouth wet. Beautiful illustrations.
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