Bermuda's Beaches

the sweet salted air--
piercing sound of crushing waves
wet, pink-sanded beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 14, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Sounds so so dreamy Brandee>>James
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May 2, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this poem. You paint a picture with words in this one. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 27, 2009 at 12:44 PM
Oh, how I wish I could be there right now. Your words actually put me there, excellent write! Michael
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February 13, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Nice image, Brandee. Keep up the good work!
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