Millard Lowe Poet Free verse

Bereft Soul

loneliness is a period
without
a full sentence;

it mirrors a riverbed
that once
knew water.

loneliness is like a dried
empty egg shell
that has lost its all;

you were the watered
sentenced yolk of my life
and i miss you so dearly.

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Laura Leiser March 15, 2017 at 11:28 PM Wonderful metaphors in well chosen words, Millard. Great write, 7. :) Millard Lowe March 16, 2017 at 11:00 AM Laura, I appreciate the time you took to read and send back encouraging feedback on this poem. Thanks. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 14, 2017 at 7:43 PM Oh, another 7 for you today. This piece is perfection. ;) Millard Lowe March 16, 2017 at 10:58 AM As I was saying, I am so pleased that we are making each other's day! I appreciate the read and great feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe Millard Lowe March 16, 2017 at 10:56 AM Maureen, I am so pleased that we are