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bereft soul


loneliness is a period
without
a full sentence;

it mirrors a riverbed
that once
knew water.

loneliness is like a dried
empty egg shell
that has lost its all;

you were the watered
sentenced yolk of my life
and i miss you so dearly.  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/15/2017 11:28:00 PM
Wonderful metaphors in well chosen words, Millard. Great write, 7. :)
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Date: 3/16/2017 11:00:00 AM
Laura, I appreciate the time you took to read and send back encouraging feedback on this poem. Thanks. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
Date: 3/14/2017 7:43:00 PM
Oh, another 7 for you today. This piece is perfection. ;)
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:58:00 AM
As I was saying, I am so pleased that we are making each other's day! I appreciate the read and great feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
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Date: 3/16/2017 10:56:00 AM
Maureen, I am so pleased that we are