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Bereaved

Waking up not knowing how to feel A friend that I haven’t known for years The unexpected news not seeming real Sadness but vacant of tears Not wanting to stay in, but knowing I will A moment of time personified by my deepest fears Waking up not knowing how to feel Time passes, unlike the pain The world is bright but my mind is grey Constantly feeling the same Waiting for the end of the day Thinking of the name Struggling to cope but there’s always a way No one but life itself to blame I’ve heard all the words people like to say Time passes, unlike the pain B word poetry contest 27/1/23 Constance La France

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:42:00 AM
Kurtis, emotional write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Date: 2/1/2023 2:08:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:55:00 AM
Great emotions in this poem.
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Kurtis Steigmann
Date: 1/27/2023 12:07:00 PM
I just read your poem “bereaved”. Wow it’s really well written and very thought provoking. Great poem
Date: 1/27/2023 3:26:00 AM
And yet we must make peace with our longing, accepting and moving on. Good luck for the contest
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Kurtis Steigmann
Date: 1/27/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much

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