Bent Metal Jacket

Be wild me
tighter than air in a balloon….are we?
O2 squeezed between the lines and the coded dots n dashes
We vibrate like the long metal fingers of every rake …on earth
Dirt- grated
….the sound of the pebble as the tines draw across it-
our love song…a mice minuet in A minor

Love me …love me not…

the child chants …the petals fall …each drafting gently away
                   …floating and dipping in water troughs and valleys

Loves me…loves me not…in a flipside world… 
it is all the same

The flesh of your spine rises beneath my hand…drawn up taught….arched and aching
Just as my fine feathers are 
                   I will settle them back at my sides in neat rows…camouflage 

raging storm silenced …salty seas and buckling knees spent

your cranium passion…your thought’s desire…your mind manipulation and melt
drives hard steel wedges into your sides…they belt you in…to your electric chair of need
voltage rising 
…your straight jacket fashioned to fit snug 
fists around your esophagus

somewhere down the hall a metal edged fan …bent from vibration drags it’s fingernail down the black board of the frame
you wince…….I cry out…rock n chant

he loves me…loves me not

We are down to the stamen and stem of it now
No more petals for sale, borrow or rent

(written for and inspired by Silent One's contest but too late to enter it and not really the right style for that contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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