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Bent Green Leaf

bent green leaf
holding large raindrops
instant glass

Russell Sivey

naturehaiku

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Robert Pettit

February 12, 2014 at 9:05 PM

Those drops of rain can break up that light into the visible spectrum of colors. Good little haiku Russell.

Carrie Richards

February 12, 2014 at 9:03 PM

This being a most difficult form, this is wonderful, Russell!

Nette Onclaud

February 12, 2014 at 12:22 PM

this is absolutely a remarkable 'ku. the sheer magic of the composition leaves me breathless, russell... so well done!.. huggs

Vicky Tsiluma

February 12, 2014 at 9:44 AM

Beautiful write Russell! I can just imagiune the instant glass reflecting images and turning to a mirror. Well penned poem.

Shadow Hamilton

February 12, 2014 at 7:26 AM

great write Russell so expressive hugs

Steven Clark

February 12, 2014 at 7:09 AM

Beautifully descriptive. Thanks. Steve

Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2014 at 5:24 AM

Soon to be that instant glass here or so they say so far no ice or snow just wind and rain..Very descriptive Haiku ...Thanks for the visit ..Yes, I am glad that He was willing to come, willing to die and glad that He provided a way..Caiaphus had no idea that by ordering His death that He would become our Savior..Sara