Bent Green Leaf

bent green leaf holding large raindrops instant glass Russell Sivey

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/12/2014 9:05:00 PM

Those drops of rain can break up that light into the visible spectrum of colors. Good little haiku Russell.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2014 9:03:00 PM

This being a most difficult form, this is wonderful, Russell!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2014 12:22:00 PM

this is absolutely a remarkable 'ku. the sheer magic of the composition leaves me breathless, russell... so well done!.. huggs

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 2/12/2014 9:44:00 AM

Beautiful write Russell! I can just imagiune the instant glass reflecting images and turning to a mirror. Well penned poem.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/12/2014 7:26:00 AM

great write Russell so expressive hugs

Steven Clark

Date: 2/12/2014 7:09:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive. Thanks. Steve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2014 5:24:00 AM

Soon to be that instant glass here or so they say so far no ice or snow just wind and rain..Very descriptive Haiku ...Thanks for the visit ..Yes, I am glad that He was willing to come, willing to die and glad that He provided a way..Caiaphus had no idea that by ordering His death that He would become our Savior..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2014 10:31:00 PM

what a cute ending. a very cute glass for a squirrel!!!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/11/2014 10:23:00 PM

Wow,a powerful haiku Russell, I really enjoyed this great work; kudos.