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benign bliss burn

feel the compelling pull
of divine bliss magnetism 
toroidal effervescence radial
surging in all directions at once 
arising from a centreless fulcrum 
fixating thus our focus within
that as we are transformed 
clear light in time dawns

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Date: 3/24/2025 6:03:00 AM
Nice use of alliteration US
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2025 2:02:00 PM
And title. Your welcome
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/24/2025 10:17:00 AM
hmmm ~ only in 6th line slightly

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