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I was sinking and searching for humanity’s peace. Hoping to find silence from worldly, negative speech! To let the cool, kimd, aqueous, blue waves, Remind mankind to please, oh,please,behave. The minuscule , sparkling wondrous fish eyes Studied me with awed and great surmise. I wished to stay beneneath the calmness of the sea. The earth I once knew, beseiged now with rank hypocrisy! On earth, good morphed into evil, and evil now was good? With my fish soul brothers~ i chose to live, ah, if only I could! 5/7/2024

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/4/2024 11:44:00 AM

What a creative/wonderful write with a pretty picture.... Have a great day.......................

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/5/2024 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Paulz.. so great to know you liked it. Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 5/12/2024 5:04:00 PM

A wonderful creative poem that has a unique melody.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2024 4:53:00 AM

Glad you heard the melody in the words.))) Pangie Romios

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2024 3:45:00 PM

Hi Pangie….a beautiful poem and concept …. what a wonderful place to live in the calmness of the aqueous blue sea with your fish soul brothers with no bodily aches and pains just floating peacefully!! Debx

Deb M
Date: 5/10/2024 4:54:00 PM

Hehe your fish buds…..better than humans l agree Pangie! Debx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/10/2024 3:57:00 PM

Deb, I love your comment! How did you know I have aches and pains? Ouch! The pain in my soul is far worse! I grew up in a sane world, no not 100 per cent perfect. But we did not cheer on evil. Murder was forbidden, today it is cheered on? So I liked going under the sea with my fish buds! )) Thanks, Pangie xx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/9/2024 10:17:00 PM

This poem is of our current times. I think of the line "Remind mankind to please, oh please, behave". Compassion would help the world right now.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/9/2024 10:39:00 PM

Dearest Hilda, you see, from your commment and others the poem, this country wants smiles and hugs. But there is a group called the Arabella group, who is poisoning not only our country but Europe as well with billiions of dollars it is poisoning professors, intellectuals, students, lawyers, and plain people.to make us hate the USA, its goal: total Marxism and destruction of God..Pangie

Paige Hind

Date: 5/9/2024 1:03:00 PM

A beautiful poem, loved the idea of fish souls

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/9/2024 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Paige, greatly apprecyared! I, too liked the idea of fish being understamding. Hugs, Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/8/2024 11:34:00 AM

Hello pan agiota, i would lkie to stay beanth the water it is calm there . the earth is noisy. hugs. /Darlene/ xxx/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/9/2024 10:47:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, Yes cheers to peace and unity. Okay IK will read the emai. In a while. thank you for the email. Hugs. Sparkles hugs. /Darlene .xxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/8/2024 12:30:00 PM

Yes! Lets both be mermaidsLOL. Here is to peace and unity! I just sent you a long email! Tropical waters and aquatic life is stunningly beautiful. Hugs, Pangie and Irene(Meow!)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/8/2024 2:26:00 AM

How I agree with you. Remember the words of Jesus: When the Son of Man returns, will He find faith? Not everyone is bad, but in the minority.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/8/2024 2:43:00 AM

Hugs to you Victor from so far away, you give much to many here! You are an amazing man, in word and action and kindneess, and an inspiration for all of us! A reminder that the Lord runs the show not us. Heaven is the ultimate prize. And I’m sure you will get that..peace be unti you in all you do!. Thank you, Victor. Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/7/2024 6:19:00 PM

Love your first line dear one: "I was sinking and searching for humanity’s peace." Keep writing, never give up hope.....

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2024 8:41:00 PM

Linda~ for some reason, probaly due to intense work in the field of transformatiom, I learned to abandon hope, that’s as powerful as blowing out candles on a birthday cake and wishing for a jaguar. )) It takes purpose and planning and not blaming, which we all do. We all have hard days! But in my book, the world won’t change for me. To change the world means being me…The only trophy I want, is to know I mase a difference on this planet! I can’t fake it. Like in poetry, if I am just here to win or be top dog, that IS the huge loss. If I am here to be adored, a worse loss. You know me quite well. We are open with each other but rarely read each other..I think that’s phenomenal! That’s what I call real friendship. I totally trust you and love you. Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2024 3:49:00 PM

Living with fish under water sounds like a better option than living above ground sometimes... What's your 'gill capacity' by the way? And watch out for those hookers!!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2024 4:02:00 PM

Thanks Gershom i thought about the dangers, you mentioned. But far more fear above ground. I need nnot mention them to you. Id feel safer in shark filled waters, even compared to walking on a street in any big city right now, Canada has similar issues. Thanks, so muc

Regina Elliott

Date: 5/7/2024 3:28:00 PM

A stirring and compelling poem you have penned from your big heart, dear friend. I feel your compassionate soul's longing for a world with peace, and good people exalted, not the monsters in humanity. Shalom to you, kind hearted poetess. xxoo

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2024 3:52:00 PM

You know me quite well, Regina. Good people are painted evil, oh, sadly true, Rabble rousers are crowned in rubies!America is a Republic, not a satellite of Communist China. You want Marxism? Move to one of their countries where all get zan equal amount of food a day.and there is no freedpeech. Destruction is not free speech? But people think so. Try it in China see what they do. Bet most here do not know what Falun Gong is! Poets here do not even my poem explained my feeling vote. Iraqis stoid in long lines to vote and were killed. Enuff said. Salte to all who served, vote and fly the flag. And salute this country with pride.thank you seweet one! Pangie xx