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Beneath the Sobbing Willow

Beneath the sobbing willow, In her white dress, she stood still. Eyes closed to the clouds above her, Hair dancing to the wind's tune. She has unspoken words, And no voice to speak. She held a breath and soon let it go. With her hand tightly grasping her dress, She painfully knelt. And beneath the sobbing willow, He saw a woman in pain. Unable to take a step, He watched her shed tears. With arms that could not move, Legs that could not walk, He watched her deeply afar. Beneath the sobbing willow, There's a woman he longed to hug.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/6/2016 10:17:00 AM
Reminds me very much of W.B.Yeats and his poem..."The wanderings of Oisin". Very nicely penned, Sarah - My best regards! :) john
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 4/13/2016 6:58:00 AM
thank you John :)
Date: 2/18/2016 8:59:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/18/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you very much my good friend...so nice of you to say such thing :)
Date: 2/14/2016 10:44:00 PM
Such a sorrowful piece... I wrote a poem entitled 'Modesty' with the same theme So well written Sarah! Best wishes, Keith
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/15/2016 12:54:00 AM
ohhhh let me go and check that one...thank you for passing by Keith :).. cheers

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