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Beneath the Sea

galleons passing
body of saline water 
far reaching graveyard

5/3/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2018 at 3:12 PM

Congrats for being in top three, Eve. it includes a lot of us but it makes it very nice to see so many haiku at once by going through the list!

Moon Flower

May 13, 2018 at 1:11 AM

Congratulations, Eve!

Jan Allison

May 12, 2018 at 7:13 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Sonia Walker

May 12, 2018 at 3:38 PM

Eve, an exciting nautical haiku. Congratulations on your winning spot. ~ Sonia

Tom Cunningham

May 12, 2018 at 3:35 PM

Back with congratulations Eve. Tom.

Jean Murray

May 12, 2018 at 2:53 PM

Just like Jack from The Titanic Eve. Congratulations on this titanic haiku's placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 12, 2018 at 8:37 AM

- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, Eve :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

May 11, 2018 at 11:34 PM

Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your podium win.

Pandita Sietesantos

May 7, 2018 at 1:35 PM

You, my dear, have mastered this challenging form and your incredible talent is reflected in this well-crafted piece! Brilliant haiku! Hugs. Pandita

Harry Horsman

May 6, 2018 at 3:34 AM

A ship wreck in 17 syllables, and the impact is amazing.. excellent haiku Eve.

Jan Allison

May 5, 2018 at 3:57 PM

such sad imagery Eve, so many lives were and still are lost at sea:-( love the picture you posted with the poem too:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

May 4, 2018 at 10:12 AM

Great moving haiku, good luck in contest!

Tom Cunningham

May 4, 2018 at 12:41 AM

Great hakiu Eve, this reminded me of a place off the west coast of Ireland called Spanish point, its where many ships of the armada sank after hitting the rocks. Good luck. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

May 4, 2018 at 12:09 AM

Well done! It was one of the pictures I saw over at the contest?

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