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Beneath the rubble

there is beauty where i look
some days i need to look harder

i used to wake up and taste the promise
of wonder and magic in the air

now it's more of a daily struggle
maybe the connections have become rusty

perhaps life just wore me down
but optimism is truly worth the struggle



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alhemaidy Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 4:06 AM
"Optimism is truly worth the struggle". Yes. Stand up, enjoy what you still have dear friendly poet! Have a nice day ~ AA
Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Very true ~ thanks, have an awesome day
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