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there is beauty where i look some days i need to look harder i used to wake up and taste the promise of wonder and magic in the air now it's more of a daily struggle maybe the connections have become rusty perhaps life just wore me down but optimism is truly worth the struggle

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Date: 5/6/2025 4:06:00 AM
"Optimism is truly worth the struggle". Yes. Stand up, enjoy what you still have dear friendly poet! Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 5/6/2025 4:44:00 PM
Very true ~ thanks, have an awesome day

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