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Beneath the Rainbow

shock of hope after great deluge - 
                                         chromaticism of edenic dreams

2/28/2023

rainbowmonoku

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/5/2023 8:05:00 AM

So powerful dear Kim ! I love the passion and imagery . Quite breathtaking ! Hugs, Susan :) Belated congratulations!

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/3/2023 7:48:00 PM

I am back to congratulating you on your win, dear Kim. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Monoku write. Have a wonderful day writing away........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2023 6:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Kim - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2023 9:12:00 PM

This is beautiful, Kim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/1/2023 2:45:00 AM

Lovely one liner, my friend. Best for a win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2023 8:20:00 PM

'edenic dreams?' Oh!! The litebulb went on: From Eden!! Huzzah!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2023 11:22:00 AM

- A gem, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Paige Hind

Date: 2/28/2023 9:19:00 AM

Very beautiful!! I really loved reading this. Wow, great work!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:17:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paige!

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/28/2023 9:09:00 AM

Now that’s certainly one way of perceiving a rainbow Kim, absolutely flooded with imagery and colour, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/28/2023 1:49:00 PM

Wow you really do Kim lol!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, David! I appreciate you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, David! I appreciate you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thank you, David! I appreciate you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:10:00 PM

Thank you, David! I appreciate you!

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/28/2023 7:56:00 AM

WOW!! Kim, FANTASTIC one liner :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Fin!

Beneath the Rainbow

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