Beneath the Rainbow

shock of hope after great deluge - 
                                         chromaticism of edenic dreams

2/28/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawrence Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:05 AM
So powerful dear Kim ! I love the passion and imagery . Quite breathtaking ! Hugs, Susan :) Belated congratulations!
Chuuk Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:48 PM
I am back to congratulating you on your win, dear Kim. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Monoku write. Have a wonderful day writing away........................
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:03 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Kim - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 9:12 PM
This is beautiful, Kim
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:45 AM
Lovely one liner, my friend. Best for a win.
Wolf Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 8:20 PM
'edenic dreams?' Oh!! The litebulb went on: From Eden!! Huzzah!
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 11:22 AM
- A gem, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Hind Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Very beautiful!! I really loved reading this. Wow, great work!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Thanks so much, Paige!
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Now that’s certainly one way of perceiving a rainbow Kim, absolutely flooded with imagery and colour, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Wow you really do Kim lol!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate you!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate you!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate you!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate you!
Chuuk Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:56 AM
WOW!! Kim, FANTASTIC one liner :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Fin!
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