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Beneath the Pillow

Confusion reigns, a muddled mess But I see through it, non the less. My eyes are clear, amid disarray I see the path, I know the way. But fear seems to hold the key, It has made a prisoner out of me. You invite them in, you take their money Telling them, "go taste the honey." My stifled scream, "not again" Drunken breath, fumbling pain. You think you own me, and my life But beneath my pillow, hides a knife. One way or another, I'll be free For the knife is meant for you... or me. Poems that paint a picture - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One 7/9/2017

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Date: 9/13/2017 7:36:00 PM
Hi Gary, back again to congratulate you on your win with this dark dramatic write! :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/14/2017 2:12:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 9/13/2017 9:04:00 AM
Gary, an outstanding and beautifully penned poem congratulations
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/13/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings :)
Date: 9/13/2017 5:53:00 AM
This is dark and deep, interesting take on the painting Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/13/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Silent One..
Date: 9/8/2017 9:29:00 AM
That's dark, with a bit of spice, like dark chocolate. Nice
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Scott :)
Date: 9/7/2017 7:41:00 PM
Hi Gary, a very evocative and dramatic write. Well done! Good luck in the contest :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 9/7/2017 6:13:00 PM
Powerful picture well painted with this one for the contest Gary! Good luck :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/7/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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