Constance La France Poet Fibonacci

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Beneath the Ivy

Things
change
just fall
to shadows
of distant sweet dreams
God seems to be far, far away
the memories of my dead family are fading
I want to hold onto these distant things and memories, so I struggle to keep them

My
heart 
broken
love is gone
lost in distant time
I want to be wrapped in his arms
our hands entwined and listening to his heart beating
I need my baby my mom my dad and have tea with my granma and hug my sister

I
want
all these
distant things
oh, can I hold them
and hide them beneath the ivy
protected and eternal and forever with me
distant things we did and precious memories, all hidden under the ivy, twining 

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June 10, 2016


Poetry/Fibonacci/Beneath The Ivy
Copyright Protected, ID 16-799-272-0
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Anisha Dutta January 5, 2019 at 9:43 PM Dear Heart you have composed exactly my feelings. Thanks n Congrats.

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2019 at 3:29 PM trying to whip one for you, dear constance... awesome example and thanks for making me part of your last challenge!!... soupie you soon!...huggs Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:40 PM Nette, thanks for visiting and do hope you enter my contest~

Gershon Wolf January 4, 2019 at 1:03 PM Wow! This is gorgeous poetry, D.H., in such a unique form(at). Really like it! A FAVE for me. :) gw Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:41 PM Gershon thanks for visiting and for the fav !

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 12:13 PM EXCELLENT !!! Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:41 PM Sun, thanks for the excellent~

Charlie Smith January 4, 2019 at 10:57 AM Congratulations, great creativity Constance, Happy New Year... Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:42 PM Charlie thanks for visiting ~

Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 10:35 AM Hi Constance, such a creative write. When it comes to writing in emotional flow, you are ever one of the best. You have taken the form and made it your own with this excellent write. Your gentle golden pen can write such poetic gems from your heart. A fave. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:42 PM Mike thanks for that great comment and the fav!

Sand Blown January 4, 2019 at 9:34 AM wow...very nice invention indeed Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 1:43 PM Thank you Stan Sand