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Things change just fall to shadows of distant sweet dreams God seems to be far, far away the memories of my dead family are fading I want to hold onto these distant things and memories, so I struggle to keep them My heart broken love is gone lost in distant time I want to be wrapped in his arms our hands entwined and listening to his heart beating I need my baby my mom my dad and have tea with my granma and hug my sister I want all these distant things oh, can I hold them and hide them beneath the ivy protected and eternal and forever with me distant things we did and precious memories, all hidden under the ivy, twining ___________________________ June 10, 2016 Poetry/Fibonacci/Beneath The Ivy Copyright Protected, ID 16-799-272-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Distant Things sponsor, John Lawless Third Place

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Date: 1/5/2019 9:43:00 PM
Dear Heart you have composed exactly my feelings. Thanks n Congrats.
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Date: 1/4/2019 3:29:00 PM
trying to whip one for you, dear constance... awesome example and thanks for making me part of your last challenge!!... soupie you soon!...huggs
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:40:00 PM
Nette, thanks for visiting and do hope you enter my contest~
Date: 1/4/2019 1:03:00 PM
Wow! This is gorgeous poetry, D.H., in such a unique form(at). Really like it! A FAVE for me. :) gw
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:41:00 PM
Gershon thanks for visiting and for the fav !
Date: 1/4/2019 12:13:00 PM
EXCELLENT !!!
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:41:00 PM
Sun, thanks for the excellent~
Date: 1/4/2019 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations, great creativity Constance, Happy New Year...
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:42:00 PM
Charlie thanks for visiting ~
Date: 1/4/2019 10:35:00 AM
Hi Constance, such a creative write. When it comes to writing in emotional flow, you are ever one of the best. You have taken the form and made it your own with this excellent write. Your gentle golden pen can write such poetic gems from your heart. A fave. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:42:00 PM
Mike thanks for that great comment and the fav!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:34:00 AM
wow...very nice invention indeed
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Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Stan Sand

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