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poem submitted to "Double the Swap" poetry contest, Joseph May, sponsor, 6/21/2026

BENEATH THE CANOPY

soft dawn awakens forest air  
the hush of morning everywhere  
old pines remember what we’ve lost 
roots hold truths untouched by the frost  

above them, plants grow in splendor
what we’ve lost old pines remember
the river hums its ancient tune
a silver thread beneath the moon 

silent songs come from silver tongues 
its ancient tune the river hums 
beneath, the melody prolongs
from silver tongues come silent songs

bush and heath, give a cooling sheath 
the melody prolongs, beneath
through shifting light on leaf and bough 
the earth still keeps its patient vow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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June 21, 2026 at 11:05 AM
In this poem, the narrative has a clear arc, and the use of nature references is fitting and respectful.
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