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Beneath October's Sky

flames of desire
as I hold my love close. . . 
the sky has caught fire

8/24/2015
For Line Gauthier's 'Bite Size Poem no17' Poetry Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2015

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March 7, 2022 at 11:56 AM

Like the product of a candle-lit search for truth ~ careful of the dot dot dot blaze.

August 20, 2021 at 8:09 AM

Andrea, I like this. Wonderful image too! Take care, Bryan.

January 25, 2019 at 8:39 AM

Very nicely written!

April 13, 2018 at 9:25 PM

That is one hot haiku, Andrea. Bravo.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

March 25, 2017 at 12:46 AM

Wow! So quaint.

Poet Destroyer A

March 14, 2016 at 11:08 PM

Andrea, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~

March 7, 2016 at 7:34 AM

I love your romantic take on the poem Andrea... Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

March 4, 2016 at 9:10 PM

So breathtaking Andrea. I have to see if you posted a yellow one. Congratulations on your second placement with this lovely haiku. I missed the red and green. Too much going on with Carissa's fourth birthday. #7

Vladislav Raven

March 4, 2016 at 1:45 PM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations for your win in the contest. The flames of peace to a spirit of nature. A seven and into my faves....Vlad

March 4, 2016 at 11:20 AM

Great imagery in your lovely Haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

March 3, 2016 at 11:10 PM

Ohh, ... Love...Red... Fire....WOW! Congratulations....

March 3, 2016 at 10:48 PM

So romantic, Andrea! Congrats to you :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

March 3, 2016 at 7:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea

March 3, 2016 at 6:59 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

March 3, 2016 at 6:40 PM

Congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Andrea. Hugs dear friend

Stephen Pennell

March 3, 2016 at 6:07 PM

congrats on your placement a nice vision

Beautiful Scars

March 3, 2016 at 5:07 PM

Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

September 2, 2015 at 7:16 AM

A very romantic write Andrea.... love the last line...Congrats on the win...

September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

September 1, 2015 at 7:29 PM

Gorgeously written, 7!

September 1, 2015 at 11:35 AM

An image of perfection... Congrats Andrea for your big win!! :O))

August 31, 2015 at 5:46 PM

Wonderful write, Andrea, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Eve

August 31, 2015 at 3:46 PM

Beautiful....romantic and passionate. #7 Congratulations on placing first in a highly inspired contest! // paul

August 31, 2015 at 11:46 AM

Lovely, Andrea! Perfect imagery of the visuals. Congrats on your top win!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

August 31, 2015 at 9:56 AM

Marvellous ........ Congrats on your well deserved win. Cheers, Bobby

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