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Beneath My Heartbeat

My tranquil world is trembling with sublimated anticipation, I’m losing my footing of romantic resistance Body shaking is convulsive proof: equilibrium quaking; off balance, I deduce Mind trapped in love — can’t wiggle out ... can’t squirm loose My feeble objections are falling through the roof Wave after wave moves swiftly beneath my heartbeat I’m tumbling head over heels, landing silver rush hard at your feet And your avalanche of kisses are beginning to smother me Only your searchlight of desire can maiden eyes see how far I fell ... As waves of your love has buried me deep Wave upon wave, an earthquake beneath my heartbeat Save me with a yes, baby come vow rescue me This poem was inspired by a poem penned by the talented poetess, Alexis Y. Her beautiful poem is titled: "The Pledge"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/18/2018 1:48:00 PM
Hello Freddie you wrote a beautiful poem. Have a nice dayu my friend.Peace and Love and Joy.
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:26:00 AM
Lovely write Freddie..filled with longing and romance..well written with passion.
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:12:00 AM
stirring work that really pulsates... much enjoyed, freddie..huggs
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:12:00 AM
stirring work that really pulsates... much enjoyed, freddie..huggs
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem to follow, Freddie. Alexis, is a very talented poet. What an alluring ending. LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:07:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, I am so honored and grateful that my poem" The Pledge" inspired such a romantic write. You just made my day. And I thank you very much my dear friend. Poetic friends such as yourself makes being here at the soup worthwhile. This is going straight into my faves:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 5:28:00 PM
This had me quaking in a good way. I must go visit Alexis as I wonder which of her writes inspired you. This reminds me of how certain kisses are absolutely intoxicating and DO throw one off balance, at least this one. Very romantic and full of need. All the best ... CayCay
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