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Beneath All the Layers

At the bottom of the mystery that is existence Beneath all the layers worn for subsistence Under happy and sad faces desires to visit strange places Cravings for praise and approval binges blocking weight removal Without building a solid foundation It's hard to resist temptation ~ not easy to stave off ruination

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Date: 7/23/2020 7:11:00 PM
“Craving for praise and approval” makes sense to me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:39:00 PM
Ha, ha. quoth the craven -- Evermore! OK. I'll go back where I came from now. ~ Neanderthal Man

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