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Beneath a Glittering Star

If tomorrow never comes may love at least confess its deeds beneath a glittering star welcomed by night's deep exaltations which offers a bond under Heaven's eternal sky pledged and pressed into pulsating heartbeats from each kiss Enslaved and tethered to this star of lovers so we may fill our soul with soft throbbing tremors of timeless tenderness, causing eyelids to close in search of love's infinite realm of misty lush language which stirs vibrant tongues into fervent flames of fantasy fulfilled by glorious desires of beautiful boundaries we crossed beneath this star's moment of breathlessness when its bright flames crossed the dark sky like a burning match, until it was gone leaving our names etched on its fading tail as a silent presence of perpetual purity of our love confessed 11/10/20 contest There's a star with my name on it

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Date: 11/13/2020 8:13:00 PM
Dear Frederic, I'm enraptured by the lush romance spilling so gracefully, so beautifully in potent poetry from your luscious pen. Each line is in a love affair with the other, lines entwined like lovers stirring "vibrant tongues into fervent flames".. Passionate imagery rouses my heart and imagination: "Enslaved and tethered to this star of lovers" - sets a most sensual scene for steamy stargazing. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest, dear poet, dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2020 2:53:00 PM
Amazing, Frederic. A stunning, resounding, romantic write. Dazzling form, I love the fading tail expression. Struck by your ability to flow with such beauty. Congratulations, a solidly deserved Win
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Date: 11/12/2020 8:52:00 AM
Enslaved and tethered to this star of lover... a lovely romantic poem Frederic.. Congratulations on your placement..
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