Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Bending Light

I want to bend my light, so that you're able to see
             The essence you illuminated, that was inside of me
                 I never imagined, you'd be with me still
                      A moment
                         A fragrance
               
                             I'll love you until

                                Until the oceans evaporate
                                  The stars fall from the sky
                                    Until the laws of gravity break
                                      I'll always be your guy
                                       You make it easy to love you
                                         I don't even have to try
                                          You are God's perfect gift
                                           My parched soul's no longer dry


                                              I want to bend my light, so that you're able to see
                                               Nothing is impossible, love does set us free
                                                I never imagined, my heart peaceful and still
                                               A smile
                                              A caress

                                           I'll love you until
            
                                    Until twenty before never
                                several minutes beyond eternity
                            You are more than just perfection
                        You're the only women for me
                      All that I have ever wished for
                    I am now able to see
                  Not a single thing is missing
                You've filled a life that felt empty

             Knowing light can bend
           I'll bend it around heart
         It was always meant for you
         I knew it from the start
           Dance with me my darling
              feel the pulse within my hand
                  I am yours now and forever 
                       can you feel the light expand.......?

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Funom Makama May 9, 2016 at 12:52 PM This is brilliant beyond words... A lovely and wonderful share

Eileen Manassian May 2, 2016 at 2:56 AM I read this beauty on Facebook. You really know how to infuse your love for your sweetie in your words. It's palpable. Wonderful write. Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2016 at 8:14 AM Thanks, I liked this one even better once I got the idea to create the curves.

Timothy Hicks April 28, 2016 at 11:45 PM I remember seeing this shape on Facebook but never ended up reading it. Not only was this very creative, but a beautiful expression of love. The concept of bending light and connecting it with your passion was engaging for me ... I bet this was a joy, not only to come up with the words, but to create that beautiful shape ... loved this one! Richard Lamoureux April 29, 2016 at 7:42 PM You are correct, it basically means there will never be a time when I will not love her. Timothy Hicks April 28, 2016 at 11:47 PM The only thing I slipped up on was "until twenty before never" ...? Is it a play on words with something everyday you would say like, "Until twenty before eight o'clock", but with 'never' as the replacement?

Casarah Nance April 25, 2016 at 5:08 PM you are brilliant and always a pleasure to read x Richard Lamoureux April 25, 2016 at 8:24 PM Thanks and a big hug to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2016 at 7:45 AM Imaginative, knowledgeable and romantic! Excellent dear, Richard! A love that defies space and time! Richard Lamoureux April 25, 2016 at 1:08 PM Thanks Demetrios, I have enjoyed your flowers on Facebook.

Charmaine Chircop April 24, 2016 at 3:11 PM Love both shape and poem dear friend. Richard Lamoureux April 24, 2016 at 4:35 PM Thanks Charmaine. :0)

Arthur Vaso April 23, 2016 at 10:33 PM and just when I think I am the most creative poet in the whole universe! you outdo me!!!! :) This is brilliant, wonderful and ingenious! A7 Richard! Richard Lamoureux April 24, 2016 at 8:09 AM Hi Arthur, I don't think you have to relinquish your crown. I am pleased you enjoyed this one. I've made a few changes to help with meaning and flow.

Cherl Dunn April 23, 2016 at 10:13 PM Deair Richard Just an awesome tribute to the romantic heart of loving my poetic friend, your lady is one lucky woman I'm sure shes read this one and knows how much she means to her, awesome again just a wonderful tribute to this special lady of yours, take care and you to have a great week together, cheri d. Richard Lamoureux April 24, 2016 at 8:11 AM I try to find ways to let her know how special she is to me. Thanks for the kind and thoughtful visit. Hugs Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2016 at 2:15 PM - A beautiful love poem for your dear wife .... unique and skillfully shaped Richard - hugs // Sun :) Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2016 at 6:49 PM Thanks Sunshine!

Howard Tunick April 23, 2016 at 12:14 PM Very clever. Lucky lady.... Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2016 at 1:29 PM Thanks Howard, lucky guy!

Mama Bear April 23, 2016 at 12:05 PM Mary will always bend with you You both follow the light where ever you go. Nicely shaped out quite clever in fact. Love Mom Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2016 at 1:28 PM Thanks Mom, love back to you.

DM Babbit April 23, 2016 at 10:04 AM Nicely done, Richard. Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2016 at 10:05 AM Thanks Dm!