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Bend, Don't Break

She walks through storms—not afRaid, but awake, With calm in hEr bones though the skies may break. Time doesn’t heal—it only weatherS the ache, Yet she plants her feet In the burn and the quake. When dreams collapse, she quietLy repairs The fragments of joy and Innocent prayers. HEr grin may be torn, but it still holds grit— A threadbare map with No hint to quit. She bends with the wind; her roots danCe and shake, But she nevEr snaps—she rises for her sake.

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Date: 6/2/2025 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Aaliyah! Quite unique! Pangie
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 6/3/2025 5:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie. I really appreciate your kind words. That means a lot to me.
Date: 5/28/2025 11:01:00 AM
This is really, really beautiful. "HEr grin may be torn, but it still holds grit" - the end, too, deep and beautiful
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:45:00 AM
Thank you so much. I’m glad those lines resonated with you—they hold a special place for me. Your appreciation means a lot.
Date: 5/27/2025 6:14:00 PM
Such a great and creative poem! I'm guessing this is for the Hidden Acrostic Poetry Contest. I'm having a super hard time writing in this structure (cries in poet). Wish you all the best in the contest!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:45:00 AM
Thank you so much. You’re right, this was for the Hidden Acrostic Poetry Contest. I totally understand—those structures can be really challenging. Keep at it; your creativity will shine through. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest as well.

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