Bench of Memories

There's a bench at the high school where I graduated
The wood is cracked, chipped and all weather faded

But in its prime, there each morning faces smiled hello greetings
And was always the agreed upon place, for after school meetings

Many then, lovers initials are carved upon her wood
Though young love didn't last like we thought it could

Also, many peace signs and let's stop Vietnam
Even, one I love John Denver and a, I rule at pac man

Under her bottom is petrified gum of every flavor
Stuck there, because gum in class was considered bad behavior

Like some people need but one name to be known
The Bench, was like a city of its very own....


©Donna Jones

Originally posted 3-19-2013, On A Bench Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dylan Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:38 PM
this is wonderful writing and wow takes me back... Bravo to you... Brooke
A   Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Awe, Donna, I like this one and remember it well... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. It is still touching... xox.. Linda
Jones Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 11:03 PM
Thank you Linda.....same to ya......hugs and blessings
Sathasivam Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014. God bless
Jones Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Thank you Ravi....and very merry Christmas to you as well...God bless....
Fisher Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 1:51 PM
I love how many memories that you creatively crafted out of such a simple object that has been shared by most at one time or another.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Thank you David. Very kind of you...have a great Christmas
De Paz Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:06 AM
Here I find part of my lost world, when I was a child. My wooden bench was similar to the one described here so effectively, and affectively too. Moreover, the blu and dirty ink of those times is coming back to life in my memory....
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:31 PM
So glad you could relate....awesome times weren't they!Thanks for stopping by..
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 3:39 PM
hi donns... go more?.. saying hello t you and happy weekend!... huggs
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Hope you are having a good weekend nette...we are having an ice storm...everything is covered in about one third inch and on the verge of disaster...:-( ..I may be without internet service a while....if you don't hear from me
Dunn Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Just a simple bench yet it was such so much more by representation alone, great job here on this write. cheri and also for your comments on my work, also merry christmas to you and yours
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Cherl...very much and merry Christmas to you as well
Uche O. Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:25 PM
this bench signify memories... great piece with allusion to couple it all.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so much....and what a pretty name you have..
Melugin Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 1:00 PM
My Dear Donna, I am so glad you reposted this. It brought back so many treasured memories of mine! You are a great writer and I am a fan! chuck ps speaking of nostalgia, do u remember this?......I had a girl......Donna was her name......Since she left me....I've never been the same.....But I loved my girl...Donna...where can you be.....
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Ahh thanks chuck....very sweet...yeah I've heard the song a time or two..haha...thanks so much for stopping by
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Fond memories are stored 'pon that bench..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Thanks so much Sara....coming over to see your page soon...
Richards Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 7:46 PM
So glad this one didn't get deleted!! Nice memories to keep!!
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Carrie...along with the new ones!..:-)
Fraser Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 2:30 PM
This one brings back lotsa memories Donna, i remember those old wooden desks had lot of carvings and memories as well as gum. Great write. Blessings Carl
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Yeah..the good ol' days Carl...:-) :-) thanks so much for stopping by!
Andresen Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 7:49 AM
- Can not remember if I've read it before .... in any case it is a really good poem to re-post! - I want to thank you for a enjoyable friendship in years 2013 - Wishing you and your family a happy Christmas - thanks for the many beautiful poems - and thanks for the many pleasant comments on my poems. - Love / always to you Donna!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Anne Lise..you're the sweetest.thank you also....for your friendship and always uplifting poems...
Ryerson Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Well, I'm glad you reposted it and shame on you for deleting it! I haven't done such a thing since last month...Great poem, great memories...Have a blessed Christmas my friend - Tim
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Merry Christmas back my friend...and glad you liked it....this silly touch screen...I've noticed several I guess I..just hit that stupid x and didnt even realize it..gotta gothru the notebook one of these days....:-) :-) :-) :-) HAPPY NEW YEAR too...:-) :-) :-)
Flannery Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Great poem Donna i'm glad you reposted it so i got to reat it. I can see that old bench in my head. A lot of good memerioes too. Thank you also Donna for your comments. I hope you have a joyful holiday season.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Vincent...so much....and wonderful holidays to you and yours too...
Peterson Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 1:02 AM
This poem is a grand time machine you've invented. I enjoyed going back there for a glimpse. I wouldn't want to stay too long, however. Very nicely written
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:49 AM
I know what you mean....reminds me of how old I'm getting!!.:-) :-) thanks for your visit...
Lalion Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 11:11 AM
This makes me sigh. Thank you for warm congrats on my last win, Donna. -- Carly
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Carly....and my pleasure to read your poem...
Sirak Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Nice memories. I like that you made the bench a 'her' not a thing.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Thanks Monterey....she definitely deserves to be a girl..not a thing..filled with love she is....thanks again...
Carroll Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Hi Donna, Nice blast from the past write! Ken
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Hey thanks Ken....is that a bandanna...or a welders cap? I know a few welders...:-) :-) like your new pic..
Poet Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Very good couplet here and beautiful story of that bench Donna.Lovely read.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Thanks so much Kash...really appreciate it..
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 5:08 PM
hi donns, gpt more?... just passing through... huggs
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Hey nette...ahhh.lots of family for Christmas holiday and a sickness in the family but will be back much more after Christmas!!! And will try to get out a little before...thanks....:-) :-) miss ya:-) :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:51 AM
A worthy repost, enjoyed rereading. Adding back to my favorites.
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Ah thank you Richard..very sweet
Lamoureux Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:52 AM
I have featured you in my most recent poem.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 4:49 AM
Maybe initials carved on the bench have faded away but the memories of that period never will! A wonderful and nostalgic poem a time capsule of our youth reminded us of the world we have left behind! Excellent, dear Donna!
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Thank you Demetrios....yes wonderful memories...and small towns especially, never seem to change...that's what I love about mine...
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 5:54 PM
You KNOW I wanted to turn this into a ghazal ;) LOL Light & Love
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Is that good Debbie? I'll have to get out my dictionary...remember I'm about the most unschooled poet here I think....if it is maybe you can help me do it:-)
Horne Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 3:54 PM
lovely write - so glad it wasn't lost forevr
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Well thank you very much...:-) :-) :-) :-)
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