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Poetically sees- bluer and bluer turquoise water, below the surface of a crystal lagoon; with rays of sunshine shining from above, penetrating the deep crystal blue waves; with reflected light reaching the sandy bottom, the sand ripples with endless texture; and the sun reflecting seems a water curtain. All is church quiet- except a hush I cannot identify, a whisper calling my name over and over; as gentle underwater waves caress my body, I hear the echoes of life in the corridors of my mind; then, I am caught in a beam of powerful sun, and I know that such a wonderland could only; be created by God up above watching. __________________________________ June 10, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Below the Turquoise Copyright Protected, ID 19-1151-222-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Poetically Me This Picture, sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr. (Inspiration pic #1) First Place

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Date: 7/24/2019 1:20:00 PM
This beautiful poem is so deserving of First place Constance. Your ending gave me chills! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/16/2019 3:55:00 PM
absolutely beautiful....congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 6/10/2019 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2019 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Maureen!

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