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Below the Turquoise


               Poetically sees-
        bluer and bluer turquoise water,
      below the surface of a crystal lagoon;
        with rays of sunshine shining from above,
  penetrating the deep crystal blue waves;
  with reflected light reaching the sandy bottom,
    the sand ripples with endless texture;
  and the sun reflecting seems a water curtain.

              All is church quiet-
        except a hush I cannot identify,
      a whisper calling my name over and over;
        as gentle underwater waves caress my body,
  I hear the echoes of life in the corridors of my mind;
  then, I am caught in a beam of powerful sun,
    and I know that such a wonderland could only;
  be created by God up above watching.

__________________________________ 
June 10, 2019


Poetry/Verse/Below the Turquoise
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1151-222-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Poetically Me This Picture,
sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr. (Inspiration pic #1)

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 1:20 PM
This beautiful poem is so deserving of First place Constance. Your ending gave me chills! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Adams Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 3:55 PM
absolutely beautiful....congrats on your win :) hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Beautiful :)
La France Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Maureen!
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