Below the Surface

Even in dreams, I wanted to die.
Even in sleep I had managed to rip bandages away
revealing where I had
sliced open my skin,
and where the doctors had attempted  to sow it together
to mend the rend.
They were looking in the wrong places
if they were looking for something
broken or torn apart.
These doctors had it all wrong
fixing bodies
did not mean 
you fixed what lay
   below the surface.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 15, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us Madison. I must say it was enjoyable reading for me today. Thank you. Love, Carol
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