Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Rhyme

Below Starry Skies

Golden sun sets low and melds with blazing eyes,
warm bodies entwine, ignited by breathless replies.
Unspoken deeds, starry night comes to mesmerize
as passion’s kiss shoots forth stifling my soft cries.



11/18/13 for Juli- Michelle's Rhyme Battle: Round 2

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Poet Destroyer A December 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM Rhonda, .. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA

Sara Kendrick November 26, 2013 at 9:41 AM Whoa!!! Passionate..I was delighted that you stopped by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2013 at 11:42 PM wow, yours is gorgeous, Rhonda!!!

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2013 at 6:06 PM Rhonda, beautiful pleasing imagery. The rhyming is perfect. It paints a story in the most beautiful way. Stars burning brighter than the reality. A nice dreamy romantic scene. Good luck in the contest.... LINDA

Poet Tacito November 19, 2013 at 9:54 AM Incredible & filled with honest vulnerabilities. You captured passion's innocence strongly.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2013 at 12:39 AM - A poem that says a lot from your heart Rhonda - Beautiful!! - Good luck in the contest. - Have a day of sunshine even if it rains. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey November 19, 2013 at 12:18 AM Wow, this is a romantic and illustrious write my friend! I definitely loved reading this incredible poem this evening Rhonda! What a fantastic piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!