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I delight to sit in her shade A fruit sweet to my taste Her left arm braces me Her right arm embraces me A paint of my heart For i am a faint to her love Show me your face Let me hear your voice Turn you eyes from me For they overwhelm me Your love appears as dawn Fair as the moon,bright as the sun of dawn Majestic as the stars in procession A heart of a better profession and declaration I place you as a seal over my heart Water's cannot quench your love River's cannot wash it away If one were to give All the wealth of her life for your love It would be utterly scorned O love come this way That they may all gaze on you Come back come back this way For you never left As the flowing blood streaming down my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/18/2014 8:02:00 PM
Obedience, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/6/2014 5:56:00 AM
Amazing poem Obedience, keep up the good work
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:47:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Obedience- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:15:00 AM
Obedience, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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