Beloved

beloved, 
     i love how you 
          love me;
               a wonder drug,
                    effective without 
                         side effects, 
                               written... 

in your kiss 
     and smile.
          whenever 
                you touch me,
                     you create magic,
                          teaching my soul how to...
                               sing; 

i love you, too, babe.

(Yalto)


Writing Challenge - B Word - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 01/31/2023

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Edward, beautiful, I love your created form Yalto, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations, compliments and visit, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 12:52 PM
A lovey Yalto poem to your beloved Edward. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Ibeh Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Thank you very much, Belle:-)
Thomas Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Another beautifully romantic verse Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thank you so much, FJ:-)
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Beloved" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day..........
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Sweet dialogue of love resonates in your own form. Best to you, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
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