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Beloved

beloved, i love how you love me; a wonder drug, effective without side effects, written... in your kiss and smile. whenever you touch me, you create magic, teaching my soul how to... sing; i love you, too, babe. (Yalto) Writing Challenge - B Word - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 01/31/2023 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:50:00 AM
Edward, beautiful, I love your created form Yalto, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/4/2023 10:38:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations, compliments and visit, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 2/2/2023 12:52:00 PM
A lovey Yalto poem to your beloved Edward. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/2/2023 6:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Belle:-)
Date: 2/1/2023 4:32:00 PM
Another beautifully romantic verse Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, FJ:-)
Date: 2/1/2023 1:55:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 2/1/2023 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Beloved" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day..........
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 1/31/2023 6:30:00 AM
Sweet dialogue of love resonates in your own form. Best to you, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/31/2023 7:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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