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(Beloved pronounced as three syllables: Be-lo-ved) Beloved – from the moment I first saw your shining eyes before me, I could tell our souls connected, and I was in awe of everything about you; how I fell! I fell so hard in love with you, and through the years I loved you always just the same. I send to you this heartfelt fond adieu to let you know that once you lit my flame, I never could let go the memory of what we shared – the passion and the thrill which will remain beyond the grave with me. I pray that you are thinking of me still. If so, another lifetime holds my prize: to see again love shining from your eyes. Dec. 15, 2018 for Silent One's Last Letter To My Beloved Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/25/2018 12:26:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win in Brian's contest--- and I too can relate to the mixed feelings about the one who got 'away'.
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Date: 12/24/2018 9:03:00 PM
More congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2018 6:10:00 PM
Oh, this is lovely, Andrea, and reminds me of my first love, (who still haunts my dreams more than anyone, despite 35 years gone) ... beautiful phrasing and imagery, and I'm fav-ing this one, (yes - another!). I hope you are well, Buddy! :-) <3
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Date: 12/17/2018 11:17:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to permanent Topper. Love
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Date: 12/17/2018 11:13:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet of longing with perfect meter and form, Andrea. And it appears there are congratulations due. So happy for your success! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2018 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful write !congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:18:00 AM
I think you will find him one day....maybe in the next life. I can tell how much he means to you. A beautiful tribute to those feelings Andrea. : ) xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/17/2018 5:57:00 PM
thanks , sweet friend. I always hope one day he will find my poetry but I do not believe he will remember my married name.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:30:00 PM
So beautiful. Exactly what a sonnet should be!
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:50:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrea! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:22:00 AM
Hi Andrea, What a well written and heartfelt sonnet. I see why you got such a high placement. Congrats on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:03:00 AM
I said so long ago, you are the Queen of sonnets... A fitting sonnet in the form or a letter, however, I am not sure you would write a letter using a sonnet lol.. Loved it Andrea... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/17/2018 5:31:00 PM
thanks, Silent One. I could only think of few words, so sonnet fit my idea! (maybe Shakespeare wrote a few letters this way, who knows?)
Date: 12/16/2018 7:26:00 AM
Your words echo the voices of two hearts in love..enjoying life from the very first sight.. in journey of a lifetime. My very best wishes for a win at the TOP, Andrea.
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Date: 12/16/2018 1:52:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea.
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Date: 12/15/2018 8:41:00 PM
A hopeful ending! Very nice, Andrea!
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