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Belonging

Belonging

I wanted love so very much 
That I could almost taste it.
And So I gave it all to you 
And hoped you would not waste it.

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Jeremy Martin

May 2, 2013 at 3:54 PM

This poem is colossal in its simplicity. Great work.

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2013 at 10:17 PM

Hi Jennifer, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA*

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

April 12, 2013 at 11:22 AM

... And so to whom... must take care of them all... Good piece~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

January 25, 2013 at 7:09 PM

Jennifer, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

Debbie Guzzi

January 22, 2013 at 2:43 PM

Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

Kim Merryman

January 20, 2013 at 8:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jennifer! Love, Kim

Hidden Sister

January 20, 2013 at 2:29 PM

Wow, this is bittersweet, I wrote this at 14. I am 51. I really stopped and let my poetry go. Now to keep it up in my better years. I always wanted to post it, and I did. I tried to add to it before but I didn't like it. I think it's because it was finished already. There was not much more to say. Thanks for the support.