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Bells of Lament

Embellished wreaths and lace hang low, all chipped As a shadow drifts like moth-eaten thread-- I wail! And in one rush, my life outstripped On joyous Yuletide an ordeal instead: While bells peal of lament I can't contain-- How our union sweet, the nights desecrate A goodbye that is riddled with much pain, When new stars entomb him---my song, my fate. ~ 'JAN 2019 WK2 Contest

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Date: 1/11/2019 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:07:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your win for this beautifully sad poem. All my best. John
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Date: 1/11/2019 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, nette.
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Date: 12/18/2018 6:44:00 PM
Very touching and sadly sweet, Nette ... your writing NEVER disappoints. Seriously, I have never opened a piece of yours that I didn't love ... that's a rare thing. Excellent! Have a wonderful holiday, my friend - you are an excellent writer. <3
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Date: 12/18/2018 9:42:00 AM
The other side of Christmas most would not tread on. I felt the twitch of pain through your haunting, brilliant work.
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:06:00 PM
Excellent poetry, nette.
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:05:00 PM
Absolutely sublime! The bitter sense of despair came through excellently, without a doubt. Christmas is not always about fruitcake. I'm sure this is imaginary.
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