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Bells are heard peals, loud and clear clangs from the church tower welcome friends to assemble here for a wedding to take place on the hour tolls after the vows were spoken chimes of joy ~ June 7, 2017 ~ Bells Contest by John Anderson

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/19/2017 9:27:00 AM

Lovely, Lin--Congrats!! Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 6/19/2017 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Janice.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/18/2017 8:45:00 AM

congrats, Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 8:47:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Dale.

James Inman

Date: 6/18/2017 8:16:00 AM

Great write Lin, wonderfully chosen words, uplifting beautiful subject and an excellent shape.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 8:42:00 AM

Thank you for the compliments, James.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 6/18/2017 4:55:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Lin. Congrats on your win.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Afzal.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2017 3:59:00 AM

many congrats on your win Lin:-):-)hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:48:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Jan.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/16/2017 10:20:00 AM

Yours is so beautiful and positive, Lin, love it:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:48:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Jo.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/12/2017 8:20:00 AM

Another beauty.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thank you, scott.

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 6/9/2017 12:13:00 PM

sweet poet...enjoyed much

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thank you, Eye.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2017 8:14:00 AM

- Your bells chimed for love and joy, Lin - Most bells are electronic in Norwegian churches today - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/18/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.

Darren White

Date: 6/8/2017 6:12:00 AM

It's not just a bell, you managed to create the shape without having to rely on extra white space between words. Love the rhyme, internal and external, and the alliteration, the clear clangs especially.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/8/2017 7:01:00 AM

Hi, Darren, and many thanks for the oodles of sweet comments.