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Bells Chimed

Bells
are heard
peals, loud and clear
clangs from the church tower
welcome friends to assemble here
for a wedding to take place on the hour
tolls after the vows were spoken
chimes of
joy



~ June 7, 2017 ~
Bells Contest
by John Anderson

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Janice Canerdy June 19, 2017 at 9:27 AM Lovely, Lin--Congrats!! Janice Lin Lane June 19, 2017 at 3:26 PM Thank you so very much, Janice.

Dale Gregory Cozart June 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM congrats, Lin Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 8:47 AM Thanks a lot, Dale.

James Inman June 18, 2017 at 8:16 AM Great write Lin, wonderfully chosen words, uplifting beautiful subject and an excellent shape. Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 8:42 AM Thank you for the compliments, James.

Afzal Nusker June 18, 2017 at 4:55 AM A wonderful poem, Lin. Congrats on your win. Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:48 AM Thank you, Afzal.

Jan Allison June 18, 2017 at 3:59 AM many congrats on your win Lin:-):-)hugs jan xx Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:48 AM Thanks so very much, Jan.

Joanna Daniel June 16, 2017 at 10:20 AM Yours is so beautiful and positive, Lin, love it:) Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:48 AM Thanks ever so much, Jo.

Scott Thirtyseven June 12, 2017 at 8:20 AM Another beauty. Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:47 AM Thank you, scott.

Eye Truth-Teller June 9, 2017 at 12:13 PM sweet poet...enjoyed much Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:47 AM Thank you, Eye.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2017 at 8:14 AM - Your bells chimed for love and joy, Lin - Most bells are electronic in Norwegian churches today - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane June 18, 2017 at 6:47 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.

Darren White June 8, 2017 at 6:12 AM It's not just a bell, you managed to create the shape without having to rely on extra white space between words. Love the rhyme, internal and external, and the alliteration, the clear clangs especially. Lin Lane June 8, 2017 at 7:01 AM Hi, Darren, and many thanks for the oodles of sweet comments.

Paul Callus June 7, 2017 at 4:52 PM This poem rings beautifully, Lin! Yes, bells are meant to peal and transmit a feeling of joy! ~ Regards // paul Lin Lane June 7, 2017 at 7:00 PM A heartfelt 'thank you,' Paul.

Jan Allison June 7, 2017 at 10:21 AM aww what a lovely uplifting poem Lin:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane June 7, 2017 at 7:00 PM My thanks for your sweet comment, Jan.

Tim Smith June 7, 2017 at 8:43 AM Beautifully done Lin Lin Lane June 7, 2017 at 9:14 AM and I thank you for your lovely compliment, Tim.