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Bells Solitary heart, newborn in brooding silence, Steps on a cluttered path Through elms and boughs of broken limbs, In a pungent, evergreen hush Absent of astral cacophony That falls like mute pennies from wishes, No buzz nor whirling wings Disturbs the tacit spell Until a faint and far-off chime Brushes against my startled heart Like the flutter of a butterfly kiss For at my feet coral bells harmonize With snowdrops in strings of chimes Awakened by the breath of angel wings - Music born of stardust carried on wind chimes Banishes black spells in lyrical pinwheels, Melodic whirligigs ringing in silvery silk jingles Like crystal icicles brushed by soft winds - A carillon of the winter angelus Pealing in effervescent tiptoes to remain.

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Date: 12/25/2023 11:06:00 PM
Your poem is magical my dearest poet friend Sam! Ringing and silent bells always have music on it, sometimes sad but mostly beautiful. Congratulations on your win and this stellar write! Thanks for sharing. Sorry for the late visit and greetings coz I got sick then followed an exam at school. God bless you always and your writings. I wish you all the best this Christmas and the coming New Year! Hugs, hugs
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:46:00 PM
wow, I can see how you made the list, Sam. Big congrats
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/21/2023 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! I loved this theme that made me aware of the role bells, chimes, carillons, doorbells, church bells and even coral bells play in our lives - their joy, their warnings and even their sadness. Sending you joy! Merry Christmas!!
Date: 12/13/2023 6:52:00 AM
Sam, this is a beautifully penned verse, I can't highlight a line because I would have to quote the whole poem! Excellent entry, congratulations.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/22/2023 11:55:00 AM
Hi Terry! I am so grateful for your lovely note of congratulations and your feedback! I am so glad you enjoyed the lines of this poem. It was fun to write. I thought it was a wonderful theme and made me realize how bells are such an integral part of our lines - even the bells that make no sound like the bluebells, coral bells and snowdrops! Thank you! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/12/2023 9:07:00 AM
Sam, fantastic imagery, dreamlike and a bit sad. I felt like it might have been speaking out about abortion with the first line and the broken limbs, butterfly kisses, angel wings… so could be a metaphor. Congratulations on your 5th place placement! ~ Kim
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/22/2023 12:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim! This was a wonderful contest theme. It made me think of the ways bells influence each day - both the ones that chime and the silent bells of flowers! Thank you for the honor of a win. There were so many wonderful entries! May blessings chime like Christmas bells for you. Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/9/2023 11:37:00 AM
An excellent take on the contest, this is so clever and you used metaphors so well here.. I dont know which verse to mentions as they all flow together so well... you did this theme so differently to everyone else.. Best of luck in the contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/21/2023 11:20:00 AM
Hi SO! Many thanks and much gratitude to you for your gracious reading of this poem. I wanted a little different take on the contest theme even though I love the sound of bells in every part of my daily life! I always love your thoughtful reading and feedback! So motivating. A wonderful gift! Merry Christmas to you and your family. Sending you blessings of peace and joy!
Date: 12/8/2023 10:37:00 PM
Love the use of metaphors and imagery in your well written verse Sam. The sound of wind chimes and bells are so soothing. Over Fork Over. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/9/2023 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom! Had a hard time deciding which way to go until I thought about coral bell flowers. I love the sound of wind chimes like a call into a peaceful place. Have a wonderful weekend as you continue to heal. Over Fork Over. Blessings!
Date: 12/8/2023 5:20:00 PM
I loved "A carillon of the winter angelus Pealing in effervescent tiptoes to remain." How gorgeous! And haunting... you seem possessed with the spirit of bells! Enjoyed this thoroughly!
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Date: 12/8/2023 5:11:00 PM
The sound of windchimes, only bells i can never get tired of . I absolutely love the way you’ve written this dear sweet sam, you have a way with words and this poem flows too seamlessly: i especially love the lines “ Absent of astral cacophony “ “ Like the flutter of a butterfly kiss” “ With snowdrops in strings of chimes Awakened by the breath of angel wings -” magical and meaningful metaphors and imagery so descriptively poetic, absolute pleasure reading this today. Sending you light always
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