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Bellisima

Belle, Earth’s grace, leaves her spire Light-laced her pace Shimmering, she glides, and the granite gleams Sweet laughs she splashes, so the mosses beam In her cascade... many parade... Aqua's !life ~~ ~
(9/22/2020: Sea Ray 240 DMS)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/23/2020 10:52:00 AM
A cascade of delicate beauty elates my senses, Susan. Your waterfall of poetry so gracefully flows down upon the page and into my soul. Just gorgeous!! A fav:)) Best wishes for a win dear poet and friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/26/2020 2:43:00 PM
lol! love the scribe rhyme! :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/25/2020 12:29:00 PM
Good! I'm so glad we can agree on your impressiveness! :) I'm your biggest fan.. coz.. I'm a Susan!! :))! As for bribes, stunning Susans have too much pride and don't prescribe or subscribe to bribes when we scribe.. lol! (got kinda carried away... the folly of la vie.. lol! Your silliness is contagious ;))
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/24/2020 8:16:00 PM
Of course, I'm impressive! ; after all, I'm a stunning Susan! It's you I give the edge with proof from the old SO contests! (though not so secretly, I wonder what bribes you used!) lol... google translator - gotta love it! It does not have my mother tongue though ... oh la vie and all its follies! No honors here in languages :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/24/2020 9:10:00 AM
Dear numero uno, you’re not impressive..?! Tell that to my imagination and heart! :)) Can we agree that we are co-equally stunning..? (though I think you have an edge ;)) You may have graduated with honors, but seeing as I had to run your response through a Spanish translator, I would say that I'm in the same place with Spanish as I was with our online French class.. staying back another year lol! C'est la vie, mon amie!! :))
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/23/2020 5:22:00 PM
no no soy impresionante Susan número dos...ahora necesitamos un número de tres...donde están todos los Susan? I guess we have graduated from our online French class and are now in Spanish! Much less croaking involved, thank goodness... :))
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/23/2020 11:43:00 AM
Haha! You’re welcome stunning Susan numero uno :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/23/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, stunning Susan #1, for your lovely comment :)

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