Bellisima

Belle, Earth’s grace, leaves her spire Light-laced her pace Shimmering, she glides, and the granite gleams Sweet laughs she splashes, so the mosses beam In her cascade... many parade... Aqua's !life ~~ ~
(9/22/2020: Sea Ray 240 DMS)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 10:52 AM
A cascade of delicate beauty elates my senses, Susan. Your waterfall of poetry so gracefully flows down upon the page and into my soul. Just gorgeous!! A fav:)) Best wishes for a win dear poet and friend.. ~Susan
Woodrow Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 2:43 PM
lol! love the scribe rhyme! :)
Ashley Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Good! I'm so glad we can agree on your impressiveness! :) I'm your biggest fan.. coz.. I'm a Susan!! :))! As for bribes, stunning Susans have too much pride and don't prescribe or subscribe to bribes when we scribe.. lol! (got kinda carried away... the folly of la vie.. lol! Your silliness is contagious ;))
Woodrow Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:16 PM
Of course, I'm impressive! ; after all, I'm a stunning Susan! It's you I give the edge with proof from the old SO contests! (though not so secretly, I wonder what bribes you used!) lol... google translator - gotta love it! It does not have my mother tongue though ... oh la vie and all its follies! No honors here in languages :)
Ashley Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Dear numero uno, you’re not impressive..?! Tell that to my imagination and heart! :)) Can we agree that we are co-equally stunning..? (though I think you have an edge ;)) You may have graduated with honors, but seeing as I had to run your response through a Spanish translator, I would say that I'm in the same place with Spanish as I was with our online French class.. staying back another year lol! C'est la vie, mon amie!! :))
Woodrow Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 5:22 PM
no no soy impresionante Susan número dos...ahora necesitamos un número de tres...donde están todos los Susan? I guess we have graduated from our online French class and are now in Spanish! Much less croaking involved, thank goodness... :))
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Haha! You’re welcome stunning Susan numero uno :)
Woodrow Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, stunning Susan #1, for your lovely comment :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace