Bellagio Fountains

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Two crystal clear streams reach into the night
Give misty waves of intrigue to the eyes
Lazily falling from shadowy skies
Then explode in motion enhanced by lights
Suddenly the pool of water takes flight
Swaying and dancing, the droplets they shine
Those syncopated bursts perfectly timed
Sometimes in color, other times in white
That prismatic mist suspends in mid air
Left side then right side it sparkles and plays
Orgasmic excitement with lively tunes
Such exhilaration beyond compare
As quickly as it starts the water lays
Sleeping quietly reflecting the moon




  
  March 2 2016  by Daniel Turner

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/3/2016 1:10:00 PM

I've never seen the Bellagio fountains, but you took me on a journey through your words.. I wish to be there when those fountains are reflecting the moon. Spectacular!Charma

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2016 1:13:00 PM

You can watch on youtube. Thank you for the kind words and for the valued visit. I really appreciate your support. Peace pretty lady:)

Jayne Eggins

Date: 3/3/2016 11:24:00 AM

This really is lovely, it has such a soft feel .. really liked it !! Love Jayne x

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Jayne. They are really beautiful in person, although I haven't been in a few years. I really appreciate you stopping in for a visit and pray you are well. Peace my pretty friend:)

Arlene Smith

Date: 3/2/2016 7:20:00 PM

This is stunning my friend!... Gl in the contest.. Hugs.. Arlene

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2016 7:30:00 PM

Thank you ,Arlene. I am glad you enjoyed it. You are so kind to read and comment and then to wish me luck. I really appreciate you. Peace my pretty friend:)