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BELL ALERT AT SISTERs FRONT DOOR

open beaks of Spring — baby birds in choral chirp hungry for a worm 5/7/2019

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Date: 5/9/2019 4:35:00 PM
Oh, my, they chirp, no, THEY CHIRP like one hundred thousand devils hungry for my brain right outside my window every night! Oh, no, nightingales are coming! Very actual metaphor, Kim. But not dramatic enough, in my case)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2019 7:58:00 PM
My sis is going through same thing! LOL
Date: 5/7/2019 9:27:00 PM
Love how the title works with the baby birds' open mouth. Each enhances the other. Nice!! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 5/7/2019 3:44:00 PM
Yes, those baby birds will keep the parents busy with their beaks open. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 9:36:00 PM
So cute! Thanks, Sara! My pleasure to visit your page :)
Date: 5/7/2019 2:34:00 PM
very cute one, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! The video from my sis is priceless! An aerial view. I think my nephew must have taken it from an open window.