Belinda's First Poem

*My little sister, Belinda, wrote this for me today and I wanted to share it.  She'd never written any sort of poetry before and I was impressed.  I was also nearly moved to tears (but I'm tough so maintained composure).  Often times Belinda is the victim of my sonnet rough-drafts - I'm glad none of my bad writing habits seem to have infiltrated her beautiful poetic voice.  Belinda's a wonderful aunt to both of my daughters...my fight for access to the younger of the two, Ava, is what this is written about*


I know what it’s like
this weight on your chest
the pain and struggle
never to rest

Love makes it harder
it multiplies sorrow
emotions are raw
and the distance seems farther

The battle rages
the wounds fill with salt
diligence is the only way
to put war to a halt

Remember the reason
you’re fighting this fight
her smile, her laugh, 
her constant delight

Find strength you don’t have
hold fast to her embrace
don’t cost yourself time 
from seeing her face

Make up your mind
do what you must
soon it will settle
this battlefield dust

Be smarter than the enemy
don’t give her bullets
she’ll take you prisoner
no keys, and you know this

Rely on love to push you through
not as a crutch for decisions that destroy
do what’s right
and you’ll win

You’ll bring back your joy.

3/18/2017
Written by Belinda Renee Bostic (or maybe she's a Garcia again, I can't keep up)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krampe Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 5:08 PM
You have a caring and talented sister, Phillip.
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Poetry must run through her veins Phillip - I am sure you will gain comfort from her words - this gave me a huge lump in my throat:-) like the new avatar:-):-) hugs Jan xx
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March 21, 2017 at 9:40 AM
This made me cry Phillip, and I am a tough Sheriff! Your sister can write, this is beautiful and it just jumped right into my heart and soul. I know my fight is a different one, Phillip, very different. but somehow we both are fighting the fight of our lives. Listen to her, she speaks wise words! <3
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 3:36 PM
- How lovely written ... a sister who cares :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Great work Belinda, terrific first effort, keep it up...
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