Believing Paradise

Believing Paradise
                   
                         Soothing is the world appealing to you
                         remembering yourself in a feeling of glue
                         shaping your thoughts to the end of the way
                         simply it is possible in this world of unsaid

                         To have a peace in your mind
                         everyone is searching for a proper kind 
                         dissolve yourself in the truest feelings
                         But could not be able to fill up other's healings

                         So why is there so much of revolution 
                         So much of confusion
                         as no one is able to be in the field of 
                         SELF EXPLORATION and SELF INTUTIONS.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 22, 2016 at 11:10 PM
aakanksha singh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 31, 2015 at 9:43 PM
AS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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