Believe In Your Dreams

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"The Future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."

~ Eleanor Roosevelt

we learn from the past putting mistakes behind us and then move forward there are no limits no boundaries or fences on the roads we walk life is a canvas we hold the brush in our hand to paint our pathway this is the dawning of making our dreams come true each beautiful one create a future with an open mind and heart beginning today ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ May 7, 2016 Nayda's 'Future' Contest

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/19/2016 8:32:00 PM

Hi Lin, each of these Senryu is excellently written. Each one is a part of the whole. Your Senryu paint a beautiful canvas, a canvas where each of your dreams can come true. Through your words i come to believe. It is hard to believe anything on the soup these days but i do believe in my dreams. A beautiful set of Senryu with a strong message. This is a definite seven.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/11/2016 10:51:00 PM

I love the way you make life a canvas on which we can create our dreams, Lin. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! 7, Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 5/11/2016 1:31:00 PM

Lin, wonderful poem, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 5/11/2016 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations Lin on the placement of the contest

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/7/2016 10:08:00 AM

I like this :) excellent senryus:) all of them:) a fave and #7:):)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2016 12:47:00 PM

You're very gracious, Jo. Thank you.

Jolene Cheyney

Date: 5/7/2016 8:55:00 AM

if it is my heart you seek Please now please just let me speak The courage to move on your Lord will supply Cuz women and married men need not apply

Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2016 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Jolene.