Lin Lane Poet Senryu

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"The Future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."

                                                                              ~  Eleanor Roosevelt

Believe In Your Dreams

we learn from the past
putting mistakes behind us
and then move forward

there are no limits
no boundaries or fences
on the roads we walk

life is a canvas
we hold the brush in our hand
to paint our pathway

this is the dawning
of making our dreams come true
each beautiful one

create a future
with an open mind and heart
beginning today


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May 7, 2016
Nayda's 'Future' Contest

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Vladislav Raven August 19, 2016 at 8:32 PM Hi Lin, each of these Senryu is excellently written. Each one is a part of the whole. Your Senryu paint a beautiful canvas, a canvas where each of your dreams can come true. Through your words i come to believe. It is hard to believe anything on the soup these days but i do believe in my dreams. A beautiful set of Senryu with a strong message. This is a definite seven.

Sandra Haight May 11, 2016 at 10:51 PM I love the way you make life a canvas on which we can create our dreams, Lin. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! 7, Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars May 11, 2016 at 1:31 PM Lin, wonderful poem, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores May 11, 2016 at 1:25 PM Congratulations Lin on the placement of the contest

Joanna Daniel May 7, 2016 at 10:08 AM I like this :) excellent senryus:) all of them:) a fave and #7:):) Lin Lane May 7, 2016 at 12:47 PM You're very gracious, Jo. Thank you.

Jolene Cheyney May 7, 2016 at 8:55 AM if it is my heart you seek Please now please just let me speak The courage to move on your Lord will supply Cuz women and married men need not apply Lin Lane May 7, 2016 at 12:46 PM Thanks for reading, Jolene.